You asked me for one last road trip. I'm your best friend. Of course I said yes.

Warning

Please be advised that this visual novel contains mentions of death


one last time. is a short kinetic novel made within 10 days for the Velox Fabula game jam. This story is a stand alone AU of a short story written years ago, Vill I. An's School for Terrible Boys and Girls.

Features:

  • 1.7k words
  • 3 colorful backgrounds
  • 3 CGs
  • 2 Sprites
  • Pain

Credits:

Writing, art, and programming: Pumpkin Spike

3D Camera Motion code: akakyouryuu

Music and sound effects: Dova-Syndrome
Updated 18 days ago
StatusReleased
PlatformsHTML5, Windows, macOS, Linux
Rating
Rated 4.8 out of 5 stars
(25 total ratings)
Authorpumpkin spike
GenreVisual Novel
Made withRen'Py
TagsAnime, Colorful, Kinetic Novel, Manga, Ren'Py, Short
Average sessionA few minutes

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wonderful.. eyes are wet and brain wanting similar stories with beautiful art. 

Poignant and beautiful. Extra kudos for pulling this off with no pre-jam prep time!

Beautiful game that made me cry T-T

this is so sweet i was really close to crying, i love how simple it is but has so much meaning!! HOORAY >_<

beautifull game.

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im crying im sobbing im bawling this was so sad but so good i love it but it makes me cry its 😿

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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! ;v;

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Actually sobbing, the end really hit me hard man.

I'm sorry haha... ^^;

Thank you for playing!

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hello! I've played your game. It's really beautiful and emotional. I've noticed when you play it for the second time the whole experience is different! Ending surprised me I didn't know what's happening, but I realized soon enough! It's a really beautiful game. I hope you're doing okay. Good job! <3

Thank you so much for playing and recording your reactions! ^^ I enjoyed your video!

Thank you for making such a beautiful game! <3

this actually felt so bittersweet :') such a touching game

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! (:

am going to give you the highest rating on Tuesday 😁(✦ ‿ ✦)

Thank you so much for playing and showcasing!! 

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This story got me right in the heart. And how you lead up to the finale was incredible, the plot kept me guessing until the very end (the end hit like a sucker punch). Loved the soundtracks too, the twinkling melody is so saddening and the sounds of the sea are so nostalgic... this game really is a powerful elegy on grief and death.


Thank you for sharing this. It is a very precious game.

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Thank you so much Yuu!! I'm glad you enjoyed this game ^^ I was a little worried the theme might've been too heavy so I'm happy to hear it is still enjoyable

That's okay and I really appreciated the theme being heavy in places too, it's not easy to find a game that expresses grief in such a nuanced and comfortable way

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i am in tears and will be drowning in feels for a good while ;w;

everything from the art to the writing to the overall feel and atmosphere was lovely. a bittersweet experience that's gonna live rent-free in my head.

I will treasure your tears 💧💧 Thank you so much for playing! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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The art is so lovely! I love the atmosphere too; it manages to be very sombre and impactful while also being tightly written and well-paced. I managed to guess the ending a little before the reveal, but that didn't make the end any less impactful.

This was a really nice story; it felt very earnest and heartfelt. Thank you for sharing it!

And your character designs look really stylish!

Ahhh thank you so much Ebi!! 😭I'm glad it was still impactful! I hoped that players could see what was happening with the clues I left in leading up.

And I'm so glad, I had a fun challenge designing and coloring them so I'm glad they're well received!!

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Ngh, even just by looking at the title I know what the outcome would be but I was intrigued ;-; its great huhu

Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed the game! ;u;" for better or worse, the title came to mind immediately upon finishing writing... My brain would not choose anything else haha

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So bittersweet and sad! But I loved this game and I read you made it in ten days, it's really good especially considering the time limit! 
Loved the art and the story, keep up the good work!

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Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed the game! 😁

And yeah... the time limit really pushed me to crank out art at a faster pace haha

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... :(

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♥♥ thanks for playing usa